InsaneZero
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Post by InsaneZero on Mar 16, 2003 0:37:41 GMT -5
SummerWolf, I'll take that comment as a compliement. And I'll also take that cake over there.
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Post by Satoshi on Mar 17, 2003 2:03:52 GMT -5
Nice work Summerwolfy. ^^
Here's some piece of junk work I made... ^^;
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Kelvoth looked on toward the young, angelic thief who clung onto the black, long haired swordsman of Issac, Prince Shanan. He could see the happiness in her bright, sapphire blue eyes. He knew it wasn't meant to be. For relentless amounts of time, he tried to earn her love. As much as he loved her, Patty's feeling towards him was only out of friendship. He gripped his fist tightly, thinking how foolish it was to fall in love. The rune knight shook his head as he walked from the scenery. He fought along side Liante, assisting Celice, to impress her. Was that all in vain? Indeed it must have been.
"Accursed Prince of Issac.. " he muttered as he glanced at the two. He turned away from them, he couldn't bear to see his "beloved" in the arms of Shanan. "Feh.. all of this... I fought and fought, shedding and spilling blood. And for what? Nothing! Nothing at all! Damn it all to hell" Patty couldn't help but notice the black armored knight walking away.
"Excuse me Prince... " The young theif shortly caught up with the knight. "Kelvoth...what's the matter?"
"What's the matter? Why should you care?" he said coldly. Patty shooked her head and glanced at him softly.
"Kelvoth, I know you were love with me.. but... I'm sorry, I love Prince Shanan." She could see the once calm eyes turned into a hateful glare. A huge weight of guilt developed in Patty.
"Yes, I know that very well. I fought this war to make you love me and you know what? It was meaningless... I have received nothing in returned." said the knight. "In fact, I was blinded that I could make you feel the way I do about you, but now I see that there's nothing left for me here... " He rune knight stepped toward the door where he was about to exit Grandbell.
"Wait! Kelvoth!" Kelvoth just shook his head and walked away from her. She stood there and that was the last she saw of Kelvoth.
Until several years later...
"Lord Celice! A rebel army has directed attack towards Chalphy! " General Liante reported. Celice shook his head and glanced at the Grand Lord.
"I wish peace would remain here a bit longer. Let me go get my sword..." Liante shook his head.
"No Lord Celice, I shall do the tasks!" the mighty general said. Celice nodded.
"I suppose you can do it. I bid you the best of luck, and please be on your best guard." replied the lord. A small grin formed on general Liante's face.
"I'll see to it that the problem will be situation will be resolved." Liante gather some social knights and paladins to aid him on this task. The man got on his white stallion as he rode from Barhara towards the path to Chalphy. In several days,
General Liante finally arrived at the scene, witnessing the honor he never seen before. There, a huge total of casualities were all over the grassy field. He looked around. "Who could have done such as thing?"
Then, he saw a man, on a black horse wielding a sword he recognize. "We meet again Liante..." A devious grin formed on this assassilant.
"Kelvoth!? How...how could you!?" Liante shouted. "You fought along side me once.. but now why are you doing such an atrocity?!" All Kelvoth did was a shrug.
"You know how things change dear Liante. As I can see, you're rather a bit late. You should have been here, they were begging for mercy and crying for their lives to be spared. It was so amusing." He smiled arrogantly. "And then the sweet scream they emit when I drove my sword into their spine. Music to my ears."
"YOU BASTARD!" Liante shouted. "Toying with a human's life is inexcusable! We shall stop your reign of terror here now!"
"Humph, well well.. it's certainly a nice day to die. The sun's shining, the wind blowing, and the sky is clear." Liante glared at him. What posessed him to do such a thing? What motives drove him to do such fiendish things?
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Post by SummerWolf on Mar 17, 2003 6:09:42 GMT -5
Eheh. That's much better than the Ishtar x Yurius one...*gets hit by a brick* OK, it's long ago, I know. But it just happens that this flows much smoother than what I've seen of your works so far. ^^
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Post by Satoshi on Mar 17, 2003 22:06:46 GMT -5
Thanks... ^^; that was just an idea I had in my head for a while when I wanted to make Kelvoth into a bad guy. =P
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NoBaka
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Post by NoBaka on Mar 20, 2003 14:33:51 GMT -5
Excuse me while I whine.
Summerwooollff. Iriiiiiisss. . . . Write more! I keep waiting for more fics!!!
Summerwolf, I was wondering if you really mean to say that Selice and Leif are gay?
I would think that their fiancees would give them at least the benefit of the doubt before trying to castrate them. . .
Mmmmm. . . . Lakche.
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Post by SummerWolf on Mar 20, 2003 20:33:47 GMT -5
*falls laughing*
Thank you. You've got to read the FE5 & FE4 Seasons to understand why I ever wrote that thing. ^^
I'd like to write up a bit more, if not because of this....*beats Beowulf with a machine saw*.....temporary lack of inspiration. That's one problem with randomness. Sometimes you get stuck on what perspective to do next.
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InsaneZero
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Post by InsaneZero on Mar 20, 2003 23:41:25 GMT -5
Yes. That could be a problem.
Although for me, I always get inspiration from other people around me, and in this board....
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Iris
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That's PRINCESS Iris to you, bitch. <3
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Post by Iris on Mar 21, 2003 1:07:49 GMT -5
Heh. I can't even get much inspiration from hanging around here, because I mostly write sap and angst, not insane humor...
Writer's block is a bitch. All I've managed to bang out in the last week or two is a crappy poem that might as well be called "Ethlin Gets Sappy in Iambic Tetrameter, Except For the Last Line of Each Stanza Which Reverts to Blank Verse."
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InsaneZero
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Post by InsaneZero on Mar 21, 2003 19:59:09 GMT -5
Heh.
Everything I write is mostly humor, because I hate all that angsty stuff.
I am a comedian. Well, maybe you don't know that.
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Post by Satoshi on Mar 22, 2003 4:48:39 GMT -5
Heh. Everything I write is mostly humor, because I hate all that angsty stuff. I am a comedian. Well, maybe you don't know that.  You're a comedian? |
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InsaneZero
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Post by InsaneZero on Mar 23, 2003 23:03:21 GMT -5
Yes, I am. ;D
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NoBaka
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Post by NoBaka on Mar 24, 2003 9:53:03 GMT -5
Where's your proof?
I mean, my sig is pretty twisted, so you know I'm screwed up.
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NoBaka
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Post by NoBaka on Mar 25, 2003 10:19:42 GMT -5
Hey! I just noticed I'm gonna be a Social Knight soon!
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Right? 50 posts?
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Yay! I can be the same as . . . an . . . unleveled . . . Noish.
::recovers::
Or Aless!
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FESS Claudius
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TEH MAGEKNIGHT OMG *falls off his chair*
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Post by FESS Claudius on Mar 25, 2003 10:54:32 GMT -5
From this day forth (until I get 250 posts), I shall be a...
Paladin!
Now I'm a promoted Aless! >=D
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TogeKiD
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I love Twilkitri. :-*
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Post by TogeKiD on Mar 25, 2003 17:22:13 GMT -5
From this day forth (until I get 300 posts), I shall be a... Paladin! Now I'm a promoted Aless! >=D Let's make that 250.. ^.^;; |
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You're a comedian?
FURY LOVE <3<3<3