Post by Unbrokin Silence on Jan 16, 2004 14:06:51 GMT -5
PROLOGUE
Two people stand outside, It looks to be in the middle of the night, and pouring down rain heavily. One man on a white horse, the other down on the ground with bruises and bloody cuts.
"Heh... i thought you would of learned the first time not to mess with a man and his army..." says the man on the horse
"I... i... i w-wouldnt think t-that thi-this could- could happen...- " said the young adult on the ground.. "i thought tha-"
The man on the horse hits the helpless man on the ground with the sheath of his sword
"YOU THOUGHT NOTHING!!"
He hits him again except harder across the neck
"f-fffriends" says the beaten man
"FRIENDS? FRIENDS YOU SAY? You and your pathetic sympathy!" kicks him in the face with an evil grin
"GUARDS!"
A sword comes down upon the weakened man's head
A flash of light appears and everything pauses
PART 1
A NEW AWAKINING
A boy in his late teens awakens in his bed breathing heavily and sweating
He gets out of bed slowly and changes his clothing, he sits on the edge of his bed looking as though he was pondering
"sigh..... another day of training.. another day of hard work"
He leaves out is front door waiting there is a young man with long red hair, barely long enough to see the mans face.. his blue eyes.
"Hey Hoshiko! you ready for another day of training?" says tthe red haired boy.
"oh boy.. what could be more exciting then "another day of training?" erggg... it gets on my nervs SO bad... when will master Kelkashi give us a break? im surprised that i havent died of a heatstroke yet" exclaimed hoshiko
"oh be quite.. its not that bad.. and besides... its friday, so we have the weekend off.. isnt that great? now lets go before we end up doing 30 knuckle push ups again... that was your fault anyway.."
"WHAT? YOUR the one who said that he was delaying it for 30 minutes!" says hoshiko
"Yea but your the one who believed me.. if i told you that i was going to die would you believe me..."
Their argument fades softer and softer as they make their way to the traning dojo.
Well that was part 1.. um.. yea It was really short infact... i needed to make it a little bit longer.. but the next chapters should be longer. so now you know what silent's real name is.. wonder whats in store for them at training...
Two people stand outside, It looks to be in the middle of the night, and pouring down rain heavily. One man on a white horse, the other down on the ground with bruises and bloody cuts.
"Heh... i thought you would of learned the first time not to mess with a man and his army..." says the man on the horse
"I... i... i w-wouldnt think t-that thi-this could- could happen...- " said the young adult on the ground.. "i thought tha-"
The man on the horse hits the helpless man on the ground with the sheath of his sword
"YOU THOUGHT NOTHING!!"
He hits him again except harder across the neck
"f-fffriends" says the beaten man
"FRIENDS? FRIENDS YOU SAY? You and your pathetic sympathy!" kicks him in the face with an evil grin
"GUARDS!"
A sword comes down upon the weakened man's head
A flash of light appears and everything pauses
PART 1
A NEW AWAKINING
A boy in his late teens awakens in his bed breathing heavily and sweating
He gets out of bed slowly and changes his clothing, he sits on the edge of his bed looking as though he was pondering
"sigh..... another day of training.. another day of hard work"
He leaves out is front door waiting there is a young man with long red hair, barely long enough to see the mans face.. his blue eyes.
"Hey Hoshiko! you ready for another day of training?" says tthe red haired boy.
"oh boy.. what could be more exciting then "another day of training?" erggg... it gets on my nervs SO bad... when will master Kelkashi give us a break? im surprised that i havent died of a heatstroke yet" exclaimed hoshiko
"oh be quite.. its not that bad.. and besides... its friday, so we have the weekend off.. isnt that great? now lets go before we end up doing 30 knuckle push ups again... that was your fault anyway.."
"WHAT? YOUR the one who said that he was delaying it for 30 minutes!" says hoshiko
"Yea but your the one who believed me.. if i told you that i was going to die would you believe me..."
Their argument fades softer and softer as they make their way to the traning dojo.
Well that was part 1.. um.. yea It was really short infact... i needed to make it a little bit longer.. but the next chapters should be longer. so now you know what silent's real name is.. wonder whats in store for them at training...