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Post by Gunlord100 on Apr 11, 2004 0:04:34 GMT -5
Er...please excuse my most horrendous insolence and impudence in doing this, but I recently completed a fanfic concerning Fire Emblem 7, so I thought I might post a link to it if anybody in this community might be interested in such a work ^^ www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1812034 It's about a morph, and asks the question, "Is a morph capable of becoming human?" Read it if such a subject might interest you ^^
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Shoen
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Post by Shoen on Apr 11, 2004 0:09:16 GMT -5
Wow.
Just wow.
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Post by TerranigmaFreak (admin) on Apr 11, 2004 9:04:30 GMT -5
Nicely done Gunlord. I was actually worried it would be super long... kinda like reading your posts... Well it is longer than your average post but since it's a story I have no problem with it. Maybe I can try submitting my fic there if I finish it.
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Post by Leknaat on Apr 11, 2004 9:11:13 GMT -5
Though I always did believe that morphs had souls thanks to the Renault and Canas support. Though good work very convincing.
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LadyDragon
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Post by LadyDragon on Apr 11, 2004 13:27:21 GMT -5
It's good, not great, just good....sorry, I have to tell it like it is. There were some mistakes, especially in the beginning ('While bad luck may have given me that particular burden HOWEVER....' basically you have to get rid of either the 'while' which would be easy, or just as easily you could delete the 'however' ).But it was good. I suppose I'll give it an 8/10. Which is a good rating if you know me. I personally write on www.mediaminer.org but not under fire Emblem. Anyhow, keep up the fine work. I'm sure the next story (chapter??) will be even better. Although you should be proud as this seems to be one of the better FE stories...some of the other FE stories on the site sound REALLY stupid....maybe I'll read them and give them the types of ratings they deserve....
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Post by Gunlord100 on Apr 11, 2004 14:57:53 GMT -5
Ahhh, you're quite right, Ms. Ladydragon. There are a number of errors I managed to find within my story...unfortunately, I'm not quite sure how to edit it once it's been posted ;;; Eh well, they're not too serious, and I'll just be more careful on the next chapter ^^ But still, thank you muchly for the input, everyone! I really appreciate it
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Arf
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Post by Arf on Apr 11, 2004 16:39:59 GMT -5
thats pretty good. also an 8/10 from me
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killaGAW
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Post by killaGAW on Apr 11, 2004 17:00:59 GMT -5
I couldn't read the rest of the story after the words I don't k. Strange......
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LadyDragon
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Post by LadyDragon on Apr 11, 2004 17:43:05 GMT -5
Must be something wrong with your computer...possibly a bad connection...(in case you don't know I know almost nothing computers and how they work) but it works fine.
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killaGAW
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Post by killaGAW on Apr 12, 2004 0:13:30 GMT -5
I tried again and think I got the whole story. It seemed incomplete to me like you could've carried it so much farther but besides that good ideas.
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Post by Vyctori on Apr 12, 2004 10:08:17 GMT -5
If you want to edit an already posted chapter, go to Chapter Management on the login screen. Choose your fic, and then go to "Replace the text of an existing chapter with new content," select the chapter, and upload your new content. ^_^
As for your fic...it's a lovely breath of fresh air for the section, and is actually GOOD! If I see one more Tactician/Main Character romance, someone is definitely going to get hurt....
I'll give you my impressions later, when I actually review it on ff.net. ^_^
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Post by Blacken on Apr 12, 2004 11:02:57 GMT -5
Very nice. (And for my own shameless plug, I've got myself a nice little sig link...)
I'll post a review on FF.net when I get the time. Good work, though!
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