Story =D little story

[AsvelDude]

HihI
This is my story Hope you like it
it is a peek of the Beginning.
?In this life there are lots of problems and I just want to get away from all of it, to be alone but...?
?HI? Hito the cool guy
?HEY, HI, HITO, HITO.? His friends
?Kaito hey, hi it has been so long now.?
?Oh! HI! U!?

ATHER SCHOOL
?I got to go, Bye.? Kaito
?BYE!? U

[AsvelDude]

?In this life there are lots of problems and I just want to get away from all of it, to be alone but...?
?HI? Hito the cool guy
?HEY, HI, HITO, HITO.? His friends
?Kaito hey, hi it has been so long now.?
?Oh! HI! U!?

ATHER SCHOOL
?I got to go, Bye.? Kaito
?BYE!? U

don't read the other one it got mess up

[AsvelDude]

DON'T READ IT AT ALL
NOW YOU CAN READ IT

"In this life there are lots of problems and I just want to get away from all of it, to be alone but..."
"HI" Hito the cool guy
"HEY", HI, HITO, HITO. His friends
"Kaito hey, hi it has been so long now."
"Oh! HI! U!"

ATHER SCHOOL
"I got to go, Bye."
"KaitoBYE! U"

[AsvelDude]

sorry but the my cpu made it mess up and so I had to fix it so don't read the 1st two.!!!!!!!!

[AsvelDude]

hahahaha no one came sniff sniff oh well

"In this life there are lots of problems and I just want to get away from all of it, to be alone but..."
"HI" Hito the cool guy
"HEY, HI, HITO, HITO." His friends
"Kaito hey, hi it has been so long now."
"Oh! HI! U!"

ATHER SCHOOL
"I got to go, Bye. Kaito"
"BYE! U"

When I got home there was a big mess and my dad was coming home too. My older sister had a party just while ago and she had work so she probably couldn?t clean the house in time.

ATHER THE HOUSE WAS CLEAN

"I better leave now."

When I went outside I saw My Dad He was so pale. So sad. I knew I couldn?t go help him. So I walk away from home. I went to a place... a place where I could rest. That was the Park I liked it... it was abandon and no one cared for it but me. That place was a place for me and no one else. I went to the hiking trail and saw something it was... a house. I want in it and than I saw nothing but black ever where... I was lost.
I saw something and it was my mom. She died when I was...
Well there was a light and I went to it and I saw my friend .U I yield to him but he couldn?t hear me. Than I notice that he was a friend of Hito. He said that he was only my friend because He wanted to look better than me (cuter).I couldn?t believe it. Than I disappear in to thin air. I saw some girls and some guys. One was a night and the other one was a blonde, next was a dumb but a cool guy, last was a link looking like guy. There was 3 girls two of them where Pegasus riders One had green hair and the other on had brow hair, the last girl was a shy girl with silver hair.

END IF CHAP. ONE

[AsvelDude]

Chap.2

Than I talk to then I found out there names they where Lord Ryu Li as the night, Just Silent as the dumb but cool guy, Yuritu was the Blond hair guy, and last their was Adilink the link looking like guy. As For the girls Paola is the green hair girl, Mary was the Brown Hair girl, and Ichigo was the silver hair girl. They where very nice people. I talk to them just a little. Than Ryu Li saw some enemies he than told us to prepare for battle. I had No weapons so Yuritu gave me a book for mages. Silent told me what to do. I liked wind magic the most. I could have chosen all the magic because I had no pacific magic to use. This place, this world... a story was just beginning.

END OF CHAP. 2
Chap. 3
We that went to shop at the town. I got lots of things I thought a bout U what could of happen to him, Ton, Le, Ri, May, Dan, Sam, Amy what happened to my friends back home .We went camping.

"Pirates" Cry Ryu Li
"WAKE UP" Yield Silent
"My, my what now." Mary
"Run back to those trees" Yuritu he said to me

As I ran back to the trees I could see le in Ryu and Ton in Yuritu. I Than saw Mary and Paola Fly up into the air. I was... was afraid... To be kill. NO!!!!!!

"WATCH OUT!" yields Ryu Li
"AH!!" Kaito
"ICE!" Silent
"MANY THANKS" Kaito

The battle was harsh and the place was blooded. Silent was cut up but there was still able to fight and Adilink had a big cut it was dripping blood and you could see the arm's bone. Ichigo held it but it still had a cut. Than he went back to battle Paola and Mary had to stand back because the enemies were so strong. I had to go to the battle filed. The fire was big. I than Use Dark Magic. I was... was so ready to fright. Than I saw my self in the other Teem. I than Fainted.

BOOM!

"HEY! You a wake yet" Adilink
"Uge, yea" Kaito
"Are you okay?" Mary
"I?m okay" Kaito

As we move on I felt so happy on the out side and sad on the end side but than every one told me to cheer up. Mary did not see as a good friend she blabbers and blabbers on about how bad I am. That was fine with me tho. I know on the in side she likes me for who I am. I was able to wake away for a wile. I felt so mad that I fainted I want to go home; I want to see my friends even if there are not really friends. I like to stay but back where I live is more important to me.

"Hey, you okay.' Silent
"I thought you never ask me you don?t look like the type to ask that." Kaito
"I can be worry if I want to. It is a free place."
"Oh yea, Can I ask you a question"
"Yea, sure"
?Okay, where are we and what is the point of this thing??
?Okay, well you are in the land of Pharmea and we are looking for the Fire Emblem to seal away the evil dragon.?
?Hey, were going to sleep!? Adilink

END OF CHAP. 3

[Hamburgler]

good, please continue.

[Wing Night]

Nice, go on.

[NomadicTrooperGirl]

Nice story. Very quiet today...

[SummerWolf]

Lack of punctuation hurts, you know.

Some glaring spellings errors and plain out bad formatting in there, too. Unless those are intentional, I suggest a major fix.

[Shoen]

*whistles until he sees this post*

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If have evoked the 4th admendment

*Continues to work on Time Blade*