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Post by Unbrokin Silence on Jan 11, 2004 10:31:46 GMT -5
ah! how great..... ='(
its over.... im going to copy it to word and print it out so i can read it without hesitation and interruption... is that ok?
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Yuritu
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Lord of wind
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Post by Yuritu on Jan 11, 2004 13:48:42 GMT -5
um i dun see a problem with it... buuuuuuuuuuuuuut if u even DARE try to use my story.. ahem... im sure u wont tho.. lol
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Post by Unbrokin Silence on Jan 12, 2004 14:49:46 GMT -5
dude i wouldnt even try to use it. i wont even show it to anyone for all i know. but i just wanted to get sum permission first.
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Yuritu
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Lord of wind
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Post by Yuritu on Jan 12, 2004 16:42:44 GMT -5
hahah.. i know.. i was just making sure is alll ^_^
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Post by swordmaster2000 on Feb 11, 2004 18:50:48 GMT -5
Great story, I liked it.
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Post by Hamburgler on Feb 14, 2004 20:01:54 GMT -5
Yuritu it was pretty good but where were all the Eric Haugen Fighters??
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Yuritu
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Lord of wind
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Post by Yuritu on Mar 4, 2004 21:08:05 GMT -5
i know its been a wile but i need to record a small plot idea i had for this story wile reading it over again.. In chapter 9 when Zharda met Celia, Celia said she fell for someone who went off to war.. Well heres were im adding in a new plot twist, u can say wut u think of it..
Zharda after leaving Lor to go to war signed in to battle under his last name Tsuchi.. This soon became who he was.. He was a strong warrior in this war earning him a name for himself.. His skills progressed quickly so that within a year he was unstopable.. Celia who was around the same age as him, was living in a small town at the time.. The town was seiged by war and Zharda had happened to be fighting in the town... Celia's family had all gone off to war and she was alone.. During the seige on the town she was nearly killed by oposing forces befor Zharda came and savede her.. It was this time Zharda saw the pain this war caused in people like Celia.. So he ran away with her.... He introduced himself as Tsuchi and that was all.. It was when he ran away Lor received the letter that Zharda had gone missing..
For 4 years Celia and Zharda were together... They were to become married on the day that Alvaren and Lor would Wed... But due to circumstance he had to leave to assist a malitia force nearby, seven weeks before their marriage.. He was killed then and Celia never saw him again until chapter 9....
hope u like.. comments please
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